Haha a guilty pleasure.
I think this song has made me diabetic.
The jumpy mix-up on the chorus is quality. I really like that and I may have to use that in some of my tracks ;)
The structure of this track is very bizarre. Maybe listen to some other music and study the structures of them? verse, chorus, break etc. But yknow up to you, doesn't mean it doesn't work at the moment.
I don't like the verse 1:35 but the transition from the chorus is excellent.
And I think on that note I'll say that the chorus is stupidly catchy.
Anyway, keep it up bud.